Maria, can you please make the photo smaller? In like photobucket or something.
About your character in general:
Appearance: all you said was that she was beautiful.
Be more descriptive about her appearance. Give people a mental image of how she
looks, not only in human form, but feline form.
Be more descriptive in personality. WIth the little you gave off, I can name about
50 people with that personality
More details on your history please. Tell more of what's happened since birth, all the way
to how old she is now. Explain more how she has the ability to turn into a feline.